The reaper

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     this poem is about a Childs Death.

    The reaper

     A Dark whisper in the night

    Shadows surround my room

    Who are you I said

    Demons, spirits, wraths, fairies

    Have you come to take my soul?

    Are you my imagination?

    Are you things spouted out of stories I have read

    Who are you?

     

    Then I was struck

    Felt the pain of a thousand knifes hit me

    I feel off of my bed and felt the cold of death

    It had come to take me away.

    The reaper

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    ginga commented on The reaper

    12-20-2009

    Brittkun, A powerful poem of fear, and the last moments of a life where the reaper intervenes and leaves us for dead. ginga

    BrittKun

    12/20/2009

    Thanks!! :)

    Platti commented on The reaper

    12-18-2009

    The title definitely dragged me in, and it was not a disappointing drag ;) very good write one of my favorites of yours

    BrittKun

    12/19/2009

    I don't see what so intreging but if you like then thats fine with me!!

    MootPoint commented on The reaper

    12-15-2009

    Nice write. I had to read "The Reaper" when I saw it. :)

    BrittKun

    12/16/2009

    Thanks !!!! : )

    icu2 commented on The reaper

    11-06-2009

    Yikes!! GOOD JOB! Full of suspense!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wow!

    BrittKun

    11/17/2009

    It a bout a childs death. It comes sudden and hard.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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