The Ribbon

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The Ribbon

The Ribbon
Her eyes reflected my thoughts.
The strongest woman I know,
Seems to be in shambles.
The ribbon the backdrop to her current portrait.
If I could, I would take it all away.
I would take her place, if I could.
“I’ll never see them again,” I’ll steal them for you,
My turn to take up the mantle seems to have 
Arrived.
The least I can do will never seem enough
To ease the pain that may be ahead.
In my short time on Earth, I’ve come to realize,
You’ve put up with more than most.
If I can make your true smile come back,
I’d die a happy person.
If I could support you enough for ten people,
I’d regret nothing.
If you have more time, I’ll spend it all with you,
Chasing dreams, smiling at the finer things in life,
And the pains…will stay in the past.
We’ll embrace the future, 
However short or long,
Together.
~Kaitlin Platti~ 
 
Her eyes reflected my thoughts.
The strongest woman I know,
Seems to be in shambles.
The ribbon the backdrop to her current portrait.
If I could, I would take it all away.
I would take her place, if I could.
“I’ll never see them again,” I’ll steal them for you,
My turn to take up the mantle seems to have 
Arrived.
The least I can do will never seem enough
To ease the pain that may be ahead.
In my short time on Earth, I’ve come to realize,
You’ve put up with more than most.
If I can make your true smile come back,
I’d die a happy person.
If I could support you enough for ten people,
I’d regret nothing.
If you have more time, I’ll spend it all with you,
Chasing dreams, smiling at the finer things in life,
And the pains…will stay in the past.
We’ll embrace the future, 
However short or long,
Together.
~Kaitlin Platti~ 

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xdavidabramx commented on The Ribbon

04-30-2010

Gorgeous. It makes me think of how I feel about certain matriarchal figures in my life, about how they're feeling. It's peaches and cream! That's a compliment, by the way! :-)

Platti

05/03/2010

Thank you so much for the comment David x3 :3

Tempy commented on The Ribbon

04-25-2010

I’d regret nothing. If you have more time, I’ll spend it all with you, Chasing dreams, smiling at the finer things in life, And the pains…will stay in the past. We’ll embrace the future, However short or long, Together.... simply beautiful. I loved the sentiment.

Platti

04/25/2010

Thank you very much Tempy! I'm glad you took the time to read my poetry :3

Tempy

04/26/2010

My pleasure

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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