Rebirth of Apollo

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this is kind of man praising...hope u like it...and leave a comment too...thank you

Rebirth of Apollo

Your muscular body glistened

As warm golden streaks of sun

Streamed down on you

You’re standing in the lake

In the level of your sinewy thighs

Where water is solemn and blue

As if your ember like body

Is dipped in the blue

To cool off the hotness within

Are you possessed

with the spirit of Apollo?

You bend your body

Hands stretched forward

Curved back

Ready for the dive,

Indeed you steal

The grace of his bow!

You fling your body

Towards the water

In an instant-

Waves rippled

From the center of you

Bullseye! everywhere you plunge.

Indeed you steal,

The accuracy of his arrow!

Now I’m convinced

That you are indeed

The embodiment of Apollo!

 

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StandingBear commented on Rebirth of Apollo

12-16-2009

An intricately written work depicting the praising of Apollo. Great write!

Rhymer commented on Rebirth of Apollo

12-02-2009

Excellent write, excellent imagery, and a very enjoyable read. Can not say more.

danmartyjake1 commented on Rebirth of Apollo

12-02-2009

I enjoyed your Apollo story. It was a small journey embodiment on a giant place in time. Very nice.

lanice224 commented on Rebirth of Apollo

10-04-2009

Beautiful analagies. You pull your words together so creatively. "Waves rippled from the center of you" is my fav. line in this work.

poetess12 commented on Rebirth of Apollo

10-02-2009

Indeed you grasp the essence of Apollo. This poem is beautiful because it's loyal to its theme

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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