The Uniententional Murder

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    The Uniententional Murder

    Scavenger with Insecurities
    A lover with no security

    Clenching the fresh heart of the young
    She flows illusions perplexed as love

    As she is entertained by his pain and squirmish
    For she has obtained his heart which can't distinguish

    Vulnerable Boy, you've been swept away the promiscuous coy
    Vulnerable Boy, only when she's done you'll see you were a toy

    She simply liked you, and loved your chase
    She never loved you, you just occupied space

    And now the seems,that kept your heart together are plucked
    As She moves rapidly with slight remorse for what she's done

    But she loved your Speed, Agility and Strength
    Then she took it all away with such grace

    Resulting in Waste my body soaks in ,despairing Everyday
    Pointlessly at the world's sorrow which suffers from distain

    Snapping, Cracking, Burning lungs are slowly Tarnished to mud
    Only Ashes Remain of the heart I once Gave my Blood

    You liked this once and then you drifted away
    You loved me once, and now your gone again today

    The Unintentional Murder of the boy was a tragic Linguistic
    For the Massacre of Men are only Statistic

    Written By: Manuel Martinez
    All Copyrights reserved





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    hx commented on The Uniententional Murder

    02-13-2009

    Very nice indeed. Great writing. Keep it up!

    EvilEyes commented on The Uniententional Murder

    02-13-2009

    You have great flow and imagery. This is an excellent poem.

    Paradice21 commented on The Uniententional Murder

    02-01-2009

    Last part threw me off a little put up to hear this is a very wonderful write. You show your emotions in many ways than just one. I enjoy your work alot!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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