There is No One There

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hey i was writing this for school but then it didn't go with the topic so uh yeah that is it enjoy

There is No One There



Her soul walks among us

watching and waiting

for another soul to join her

crying as the light

starts to subside

to darkness.

There is no one

to join her in this hell

seeing everyone happy

tears her still beating heart out

because all she can do

is sit in a corner and write

her heart out

but no words will come

and no people will come

she is never going to get through it

her heart Is stone cold

because there is no one there

to care for her

and ease her sadness

and change it to happiness

but still

there is no one there

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dahlusion commented on There is No One There

07-20-2010

Such poetic sadness and beautiful pain being delivered here in this piece. Very impressive! Bravo!!! Peace and Light, Dah

BikemanRJ commented on There is No One There

03-25-2010

There is so much sadness and pain portrayed in this poem I pray that she will find the person she needs to find her way out. God Bless BIkemanRJ

charmlessman2d commented on There is No One There

03-20-2010

great imagery of someone in the corner frustrated and lonely. i know how that feels like, watching a room of people from the outside. it can be quite scary and fun at the same time. nice flow to this. amazing how mature this sounds for being written at 14. goodjob.

girlygirl1234 commented on There is No One There

02-12-2010

wow this is very emotional i like it....Cynthia i heart you

deathbysociety commented on There is No One There

02-02-2010

Great work, i like the visual insight, that you describe so well. very deep, and i can feel what you are feeling here. Great work

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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