think of us

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this is dedicated to my uncle clifford hehl who died on july 3, 2004. he was the best unlce ever i was his daughter he never had and i really miss him so i hope you guys enjoy this piece

think of us

THINK OF US


Think

would I write about you

leaving me

that was the worst thing you did

I thought you loved me

then I heard the news

you were gone

I was desperate

think

would I still love you

the answer is yes

I will always love you

even when I leave everyone

like you did

think

of all you did for me

and all I did for you

we were meant

to be together

to help each other

through life

that was what we did

think

of us


* dedicated to my uncle Clifford Hehl*

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Laubster commented on think of us

07-24-2009

Keep writing. Everything that you write about will make sense to only one person: you. Writing helps with a lot of things.

scrye commented on think of us

07-21-2009

Beautiful, you remind me of the things i have experienced in my life. Keep writing and keep growing from these lessons life sets forth, it will make us stronger and better in the end.

photochick commented on think of us

07-20-2009

very well written great poem you have so much talent in your writing very deep and full of emotion you have so much pain for someone so young keep writing it will help a lot another great poem your very talented and i cant eait to read more of your work

mspoet1 commented on think of us

07-18-2009

Another good one. I see you've had alot of pain in your life in such a short time. You're only 13. That's alot for someone your age to have to deal with....Take care.

kittman101 commented on think of us

07-15-2009

i love the emotion rolled up in this poem. i love the flow and rhythm. You are definitely talented. keep up the good work.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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