This Deep Sadness

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    This Deep Sadness

     This deep sadness I feel comes from years of pain. Knowing now that I may never see you again.

     I've cried so hard, my eyes are all red, its tears from my heart that are bled. I can't express how deeply I'm hurt, I guess its all swept underneath the dirt.

    You say you care but your actions show otherwise. Your words are a sword, they are my demise.  I have tried for years to show you I care, yet your own feelings are all that are there. Nothing I do is ever right, I might as well lay down and give up this fight.

    My words may not rhyme and my life may be running out of time...
    But before I fall into that final sleep...
    I'll dry my eyes and no longer weep.

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    Mangus commented on This Deep Sadness

    07-22-2010

    very strong and soulful write. Your always touches the core of the reader putting them right there with you in the pain, happiness, or the sadness of the piece
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    photochick commented on This Deep Sadness

    07-01-2009

    great writing your flow is great love the emotions in this and how you let the reader feel your pain this really comes from your heart keep on writing you have so much in you that the world should see you are very talented nice job
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    AmadeusEx commented on This Deep Sadness

    07-01-2009

    you have a beginning i think, these are just raw emotions with a rhyme laid over them...but its a good start, nice job on this one
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    WinterFrost commented on This Deep Sadness

    06-30-2009

    Very sad Kristina. Emotions draped over someone who either doesn't return them or withholds out of power, pleasure or pain... Well that really can suck.
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    Kristina

    07/22/2010

    Your very right, and yes it does suck!

    cliftondurant commented on This Deep Sadness

    06-30-2009

    BLESS your heart you have a loving heart you should have love in return and it waiting for you be patient great job
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