Thought

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  • Confusion

    Thought

     I lied
    I cried
    I coughed
    I laughed
    Just Confused
    Just sad
    Just bemused
    Just mad

    Ah! What a great leader!

    He creates wars
    Well, ... security...
    For our sake
    Followers heads on the floor
    Their bodies separated

    Ah! What a great leader!

    He creates a rainbow
    Followers sleep into eternity
    For no just reason

    I now lie to cry
    I now cough to laugh
    Just confused
    Just sad

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    everafter commented on Thought

    07-05-2009

    a classic piece of the inner you, thoroughly enjoyed by all who read it, superb verse, easy to understand
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    JVB commented on Thought

    07-05-2009

    Simple yet powerful - I like it! I think using short and quick lines really helps illustrate the confusion and urgency.
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    LTSavoy commented on Thought

    06-29-2009

    Very moving and even here i can identify with it..
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    LTSavoy

    06/29/2009

    different place, I see the rein different face, who makes the pain different case, but still the same no difference, a waste, a shame

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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