Through My Eyes

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Passion is a dove that flies into the sun, only to shed tears for those who have not loved.... not one.

Through My Eyes

Staring, blindly into space, I finally reach your soul.
I glare at the dreams that you do not want told,
only to embrace the passions that we all once hold dear,
stare at me my love, and I will keep you near.
We shall breath the same breath, share the same skin, embrace the same souls, and grin the same grin.
Have I not kept you safe, and we walk the corridors alone,
We are both filled with the love and our hearts rhythms are one,
shall we share the same blood, as we embrace in the sun
Through rainbows of violet, copper amber rays, tints of sunset as the crow flies away.
Don't leave me my love, kiss me once again, I with my cherry lips and you with the embrace and strength of the oceans water,
I drown in your presence.
I only see you through my eyes
What and who do you see through yours.
The clock is ticking..... tick.... tick.... tick... tick.....

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MiZZUndER commented on Through My Eyes

06-08-2009

Loving someone is more than just words its a feeling of depth beyond depth to truly love them I am feelin this great job you a a gifted poet I like all your poems I have read.

passionsdance commented on Through My Eyes

06-07-2009

Love is such a passionate and beautiful expression . Pain follows love like a cat chases a mouse. For moments like those are beautiful but evil when they are gone . Good job

Kelstorm commented on Through My Eyes

06-05-2009

Your imagery and emotions are expressed well. Altough I see this could be sectioned with stanza form, nevertheless, you achieved your desire in emoitonal impact.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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