time

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    time

    more time will pass,

    this feeling will go,

    smiling nervously,

    as i see your face,

    what do i say?,

    how do i react?

    maybe i am dreaming,

    and i'll wake,

    i want this to be true,

    your so good to me,

    your smiling back,

    you touch my face,

    you wipe my tears,

    i am learning to trust,

    its been a while,

    you move in closer,

    your lips on mine,

    i close my eyes,

    i relax,

    we pull apart,

    you called me Precious,

    and we have all the time we want.

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    Chaos128 commented on time

    12-16-2009

    A moment well worth building on; hope, vulnerability and anticipation together in a delicate, fragile package. Very well done!

    jtmc4444 commented on time

    11-17-2009

    Real nice. Short-sweet and flows. I am happy to have had the chance to read your Poem. Have a great Tuesday.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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