Together forever, forever and always

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Together forever, forever and always

The plan that brought
Them together
was good
worked and all
but will leave me empty
for a while i will watch
and learn from my own mistakes
to see how it works
his and her
together
forever
it will work
i know it will
didn't for me though
it will work for them
i will follow through just watch
help her
comfort him
make the relationship grow
forever and always
so they will stay
together forever.

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jessicanichole commented on Together forever, forever and always

09-09-2010

that is a good poem who is the him and her the ones u r watching the ones u want to learn from

babygirl4028

09/11/2010

it was when u and codie were goin out and i wanted u guys to stay together or else it was from u and kyle idk anymore.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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