TOO MOM

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TOO MOM

YOUR DAYS ARE SHORT
WHO KNOW: WHEN YOUR BOTTON WILL BE
PUSHED.????????????????????????????????///
TIMES I CRY, BECAUSE WE ARE NOT AS CLOSE
AS WE SHOULD BE AT THIS TIME.
KNOW I LOVE YOU AT ANY COST
MILES AWAY AND STILL I DON'T KNOW
JUST WHERE YOUR MOMENTS STAND
YOUR IN MY HEART NO MATTER WHERE YOU are
DAYS I WAIT FOR THAT CALL to come in
WHEN WILL GOD TAKE YOU FROM US ALL
ONLY ONE WILL KNOW ,WILL SHE GIVE THAT CALL????????????
SHE CLAIMS SHE WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!
I JUST DON'T KNOW; SHE WAIT UNTIL IT TOO LATE
WILL I GET TO SAY GOOD BYE !!!!!!!!!!!!
ALL I DO IS PRAY AT THIS TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE YOU MOM THAT ALL I CAN SAY




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Ozzy77 commented on TOO MOM

11-14-2009

Nice message to your mother from a daughter (I'm assuming you're writing from your point of view). Just needs a bit of editing and punctuation, and it would be amazing.

Lydia

11/16/2009

yes it was and that call came in she just passed 11-11-2009

imthu commented on TOO MOM

03-20-2009

great work... with ur permission i would like 2 dedicate this 2 my mom also.. take care... imtiaz(imthu)

Lydia

11/16/2009

that fine may she be save and hope she is okay mine just passed with in the last week

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