TORRID ZONE

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    TORRID ZONE


    When i am alone
    i sit in a torrid zone
    I look around for you
    Wondering would you always
    be so unknown

    When i sit alone

    No i won't die
    Because i am seeking a reply

    An answer is what i want
    Oh! this loneliness is a haunt

    Take me out of this STORM CONE
    GOD I cant face it by my own

    WHEN I AM ALONE
    I SIT INA A TORRID ZONE

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    drewking commented on TORRID ZONE

    01-23-2009

    nice piece of work..
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    Plot121 commented on TORRID ZONE

    12-12-2008

    This poem has such a vast description about it that its hard for the reader to draw from any exsamples because there was hardly any there. I think if you described mostly a background to it this would be a better poem. Robert
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    Phoenix9 commented on TORRID ZONE

    12-06-2008

    Syed; i have read all your poems,I know i am not perfect and i do mess up on spelling and form, you have a potential to being a very good poet, watch your spelling and proof read before you submit, the one thing i notice most was the fact that you co
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