Tranquility

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This one is about you, With a K. (Withake). Just a memory of a newborn napping miracle and a holiday with the extended family. It had been so long since a baby had been around our reactions were exagerated to say the least. Hope you can relate.

Tranquility


Peacefull lying there
engaged in your slumber
watching your warm glow of love
 effect your surroundings like no other

Taking in your essence
addicted to your smell
your eyes flutter
my senses reel
Oh! the way you make me feel.

Your warmth and sweetness
open hearted and pure
A dream come true
one that will endure

Joy like no other
a new leaf on the old family tree
a chip off the old block
An answer to prayers
for me

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sevyn7 commented on Tranquility

01-13-2011

Sweet poem, nothing like a new bundle of love to adore.

Tempestlady

01/13/2011

It was fun just to watch all of the women and some of the men dote, and get silly. Thanks for reading...Tlady

HIP13044b commented on Tranquility

12-22-2010

This is a great little poem. There's no better feeling in the world is there?

Tempestlady

12/23/2010

No, there really is no better feeing in the world for me. Thanks so much for stopping by to read it. Merry Christmas and Happy New year. Check out "born to you and me" it is awe inspiring. Write on....

HarverTomsson commented on Tranquility

12-15-2010

Imprinting by smell works both ways in nature. Manufactured bonding through snuggles is more fun, though. Harv

Tempestlady

12/15/2010

Yes, i believe it is too....LOL

cliftondurant commented on Tranquility

12-15-2010

so beautiful the gift of a new born is a wonderful thing you express it so well thanks for sharing

Tempestlady

12/26/2010

It remains wonderful, happy holidays to you and yours. Write on...

devaamido commented on Tranquility

12-15-2010

What a sweet and poignant poem! Perfect in structure as well as imagery and sentiment. Obviously 10+.........................d

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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