Travels of the Fool

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Some will admit to have lived, others cannot  stand  to be  in their presence out  of  fear  of  the attention they bring....and still others
are yet to discover that  a  Fool  is  never  ending  cycle  of  experience
and training that we all  go  through in different and colorful stages!

Travels of the Fool

How  far  have  you   been
Did  you  reach  glory?
Was  the  path  paved  in  gold
Or  was  it  a  rocky  road  to  follow
Did  you  give  up  and   get  off
Believing  hardship  to  be  a   wrong  course
If  you  agree  and  did  not  proceed
Then  it  is  not  likely  victory  you  will  see
There  is  no  prediction or  pre-exsisting  condition
In  the  Travels  of   the   Fool
To  the  Fool  backwards  moves  him  forward
To  the  Fool  a  deep  cliff  is  a  clear  path
To  the  Fool meeting  enemies is  a chance  to  win  friends
To  the  Fool  there  is  no  ending  to  begin
To  the   Fool  luck  is  infinite  possibilities
Without  any determined  outcome
In  the  Travels  of  the  Fool
Are  you  ashamed  of  playing  the  Fool
All because  love  didn’t  love  you
Maybe  you  are  afraid  to  be  labeled  a  Fool
From  a  childhood  of  ridicule, 
Characterized  by  laughter  and  actions  against   you
Filling  your  heart  with  fear  in  actin’  like  a  Fool
Fear  not  because  everybody plays   the  Fool….sometimes!
Rest  assured  there  is  a  sense  of  purity  
When  stepping  out  most  unassuredly
With  the  mind  mesmerized  by  what  others  don’t  see
Oftentimes  what  a  fool   might  not  fully  see 
Of  outcomes and   promises,  yet   to   be 
As  wise  men  stare  in  amazement,
At  the  faith  of  the  fool  to  walk  right  in
And  return  with  only  the  scars  of  experience
A  fool  asks  for   the   truth 
So  begins  another  journey  
To  Places  of   Vague  Description
A  Fool  Knows  Not  Nor  Cares  
Living  for   the  Freedom  and  Chance  Learning
Adventures  are  many  in  any  direction  the  wind  blows
Scorned  and  shunned, he  still  smiles  like  a  child
Happy  to  be  just  that  in  the  eyes  of  the  crowd
Have  you  lived  long  enough  to  identify  the  never-ending
Travels  of   the   Fool,  or  could  it  be  that  this  IS  YOU?
How  far  have  you   been
Did  you  reach  glory?
Was  the  path  paved  in  gold
Or  was  it  a  rocky  road  to  follow
Did  you  give  up  and   get  off
Believing  hardship  to  be  a   wrong  course
If  you  agree  and  did  not  proceed
Then  it  is  not  likely  victory  you  will  see
There  is  no  prediction or  pre-exsisting  condition
In  the  Travels  of   the   Fool
To  the  Fool  backwards  moves  him  forward
To  the  Fool  a  deep  cliff  is  a  clear  path
To  the  Fool meeting  enemies is  a chance  to  win  friends
To  the  Fool  there  is  no  ending  to  begin
To  the   Fool  luck  is  infinite  possibilities
Without  any determined  outcome
In  the  Travels  of  the  Fool
Are  you  ashamed  of  playing  the  Fool
All because  love  didn’t  love  you
Maybe  you  are  afraid  to  be  labeled  a  Fool
From  a  childhood  of  ridicule, 
Characterized  by  laughter  and  actions  against   you
Filling  your  heart  with  fear  in  actin’  like  a  Fool
Fear  not  because  everybody plays   the  Fool….sometimes!
Rest  assured  there  is  a  sense  of  purity  
When  stepping  out  most  unassuredly
With  the  mind  mesmerized  by  what  others  don’t  see
Oftentimes  what  a  fool   might  not  fully  see 
Of  outcomes and   promises,  yet   to   be 
As  wise  men  stare  in  amazement,
At  the  faith  of  the  fool  to  walk  right  in
And  return  with  only  the  scars  of  experience
A  fool  asks  for   the   truth 
So  begins  another  journey  
To  Places  of   Vague  Description
A  Fool  Knows  Not  Nor  Cares  
Living  for   the  Freedom  and  Chance  Learning
Adventures  are  many  in  any  direction  the  wind  blows
Scorned  and  shunned, he  still  smiles  like  a  child
Happy  to  be  just  that  in  the  eyes  of  the  crowd
Have  you  lived  long  enough  to  identify  the  never-ending
Travels  of   the   Fool,  or  could  it  be  that  this  IS  YOU?
Travels of the  Fool

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FlowerGirl commented on Travels of the Fool

07-21-2009

Hummm..This Is Very Interesting, .Yes, We all Have Played The Fool!..At One Time Or Another..There Should Be No Shame In That.! lol This Is A Good Write, As It Expresses The True Life Of A Fool! In It's Entirety! As I Read Each Line..I Found Myself Wanting To Read The Next and The Next Until I Got To The End.....It Really Kept My Attention...... Thank You For Sharing, I Always Enjoy Reading Your Writes...Smile FlowerGirl...

SILKYTWEED

07/22/2009

Thanks FlowerGirl, I so enjoy your comments on my writes...it is always uplifting and understanding and encouraging...I thank you with my whole heart (smile)

Tempy commented on Travels of the Fool

07-21-2009

someone said to me w hat you need to watch for is when 2 fools collide it was the funniest little sentence i've ever heard take care

SILKYTWEED

07/21/2009

LOL...that sounds like quite a sight..thanks for reading and commenting (smiles)

Tempy

07/22/2009

no worries :)

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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BACK IN THE DAYZ versus NOW A DAYZ 0
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