Undisclosed

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    Undisclosed

     Windows are open for us, but Our lips seal shut
    Time's are changing those open cuts

    Teeth Marks of time brand the strong
    Tender we go, to right this wrong

    Our journey has been etched upon our skin
    But we don't wanna be reminded of our past sin

    She justs wants to be admired
    While I just wanna be beside her

    No one else can share this feeling
    They crumble while I start reeling

    They're running as fast as they can
    While I just want to hold your hand


    Originla POem By :Manuel Martinez
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    ayyan commented on Undisclosed

    04-10-2010

    Good writing in the form of poem on a couple to put the inner acive nature. -a'yan
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    Mandi commented on Undisclosed

    10-04-2009

    interesting technique, take a couple of readings to follow damn i hate hard work nicely done
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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