Undying

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    Undying

    Into the wild scenery,
    he is calling me.
    His musical lament intoxicating me.
    I am possessed by his illuminating spirituality.
    I’ve fallen under the spell.
    The smell of his blood is luring me.
    I fear that I must break away from my human shell…to be with him.
    He is the blond hair demon, so he says,
    But I call him my angel, forever and always.
    He must call my name, again
    And keep me from hell.
    He is the nectar of life and death, that eternal being.
    He is preserved in time, while I am fading away.
    I even walk through the mist to hear his say.
    To touch his eternal lips so he may pierce my flesh.

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    dahlusion commented on Undying

    01-21-2010

    Subtle in all of its erotic, warm blood flow. Powerful!

    Kaiprin commented on Undying

    12-23-2009

    A regrettable bond that simmers between love for the thought of joining him, but hate for the thought of what it might mean. I liked how you used time to differentiate between you and the other in your piece.

    boomboom56 commented on Undying

    11-25-2009

    You have put in words the ability of the vampire to intoxicate and capture the soul of the victim as portrayed in story and film. The seduction of the beast on women is unstoppable. Good write young lady.

    hdmac commented on Undying

    06-12-2009

    This should have been placed under dark poetry. This vampire stuff is strange to me. The ending is like the twilight movie. It is good to express yourself though.

    nixfire23

    06/20/2009

    i do love vampires but i hate twilight. the poem was inspired by Lestat so please don't compare it to the twilight

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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