UnFinished Poetry

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    UnFinished Poetry

    It’s a new feeling of happiness that has captured my soul

    These never ending smiles just seem so unreal

    You say that I’m too good to be true

     Yet I feel the same way about you

    With the undemanding terminology of kindness

    You’ve swept me right off my feet without acknowledgement of me

    I stride with a calm smile upon my face

    While inside I’m screaming shouting crying jumping all in rejoice!

    This little heart of mines has been revived!

    But with all this excitement…there’s pain…

    This twinge is not cause of the amazing you…but because of me…

     Culpability for falling into a pit to deep to crawl out of without

               The damage and bruising that might come in the end

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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