unique critique 3-4-2009

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    unique critique 3-4-2009

    You are a person, and very unique,
    You are not someone who should be critique

    Your words are very special, your mind is without flaw
    I am very sure what you had written would have put every one in awe.

    Your mind is very stunning, as you are quick with wit,
    Even when your not feeling good and someone says you look like "diamonds"

    No one has the right to tell you what to think,
    But almost any one can listen like a head shrink

    Only you and you alone are capable of these things,
    But in all honesty knowing you is what happiness brings

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    FranzJ commented on unique critique 3-4-2009

    11-15-2009

    nice build up of someone - everyone is specisl - good

    litldeer commented on unique critique 3-4-2009

    08-03-2009

    I love the ending very much. You have a way of taking the reader on a romantic journey. Great job.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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