United state soldier

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    i wrote this because i was tired of people asking me why i want to go into the military.

    United state soldier

    I will NOT retreat
    I have the strenght to achieve my goal
    my goal is small
    its ability is big
    my adrenaline rushing
    my sight strays to a corner
    to see something move
    a CHILD,
    i yell to her over the explosions
    so i run to her and become armor for her
    heart beating
    pulse racing
    my goal has changed
    my goal it to save this child
    keep her alive
    NOMATTER what
    I'll give my life
    for this child i dont even know
    this is a soldiers life in battle
    your life means nothing
    Is it worth it?
    saving a new generation over an old
    YES it is
    its a choice we all most make
    to become a united state soldier
    my honor means nothing
    glory the same
    i choose this life
    now i hope people do the same
    people ask why i gave up my life
    they ask for honor
    if for glory
    if none then why would i die
    people tell them i gave up my life
    for a CHILD wouldnt you
    if you we're called to serve
    would you go
    people mourn over my death
    WHY
    i ask not to leave sadness with the ones i love behind
    be happy think of the reasons i died
    i died to keep you safe
    for if i didnt die for you
    then be sad i died
    but for you my friend i gave up my life
    for yours, i died to keep u safe and out of harms way
    my family the same
    when you speak to my siblings
    dont tell them i died for nothing
    tell them im gone so they can live
    just like the child
    and if you didnt go.
    would you be a shamed if you let a child die
    because you couldnt be bothered
    i agree war is not to be tampered with
    but if necessary to save a life
    but if it wasnt for us united state soldiers
    who fight for freedom
    what would this nation become
    thats why we take pride and
    be the few who will go and keep you free
    this is the reason
    i choose to be a united states soldier
    and i gave my life
    to save a child
    who i hope someday
    will return the favor.

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    scarlet commented on United state soldier

    10-01-2009

    that is amazing it touched my heart, i have several friends in the military some over in iraq. I am in the process of joining the army as well. Its a great reward serving your country

    cliftondurant commented on United state soldier

    09-28-2009

    this is a wonderful poem i enjoy the read we should be thankful for those who are serving our country good read

    koolmom0 commented on United state soldier

    09-27-2009

    This is excellent, good flow and rythem, good messege, a 10 from me. Koolmom

    MsKrystle commented on United state soldier

    09-27-2009

    Very nice poem. To give your life to save another takes alot of courage. I take my hat off to every U.S. Soldier. Dont let anyone tell you that you're making the wrong decision by wanting to join the military. Only you can say what's right for you. Follow your dreams

    alexan commented on United state soldier

    09-27-2009

    this is one of the best poems i've evr read... GREAT JOB!!! keep it dudette!

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