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    i think about it sometimes when the sky is dark grey
    or when my toes are cold
    and i often wonder what occupied that space before-
    we had always agreed that you had seen it first
    i remember the way you grabbed my hand
    the way your eyes opened and closed
    almost as if you were in slow motion
    that was the last time i saw you smile-

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    lightcourier commented on untitled 3

    05-02-2009

    Snapshot of a moment nicely captured. Thanks!

    Madelynn commented on untitled 3

    04-03-2009

    You are undeniably talented.I am so happy I found your work.Awsomely desciptive.

    WordSlinger commented on untitled 3

    03-25-2009

    In rated this a 7, :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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