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i didnt really know what to call this, i just felt like writing one day so i wrote this and the sequel to it

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Here comes that feeling again

consuming every fiber of me

the greatest sense of relief releasing everything inside

staring out at the city, the lights are so beautiful

it really is quite a spectacle

all the unsuspecting people down below

moving about their busy lives knowing nothing of whats about to take place

that feeling..

it keeps pulsating through my stomach

almost feel like im going to puke

but with every fiber of me that has been consumed by this emense feeling

i push it down and maintain a smooth posture

i keep fighting my knees as they tremble

 

wow

 

I really cant believe this is about to happen

after everything i've worked for

all the things i've been through

the moonlight is perfect for her

complimenting every curve, every phsyical attribute

her inside commotion is clearly shown with her beautiful smile

i cant believe this is happening,

i never thought i'd be this lucky

the wind picks up and i feel her hair tickle the sides of my arm

as i grab her hand tears stream from my eyes

i kneel and marvel at this wonderous creation, this blessing from god

i cant help but be consumed in her ever lasting beauty

her infectious smile, those entrancing eyes that excite and confuse me

i can feel her trembling fingers in my hands

it's happened

that one look that i've been waiting for

those eyes

kissing her hands i stand up and embrace her in my arms

i feel our hearts pounding the same beat

thumping together as if crafted for this very moment

the stars are shining with the twinkle in her eyes

my knees cant stand it anymore

i've given in to it, to you

so get ready, cause here i come

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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