UNTITLED

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    UNTITLED

    By chance could you withstand me licking you from head to toe.
    With my tongue as I slowly lick.I also let out a warm long blow.
    To heighten the intensity like a feather gently brushing over every curve and dip.
    I'm nearing your inner thigh and cuming closer to those sweet juicy lips.
    Ohh you tense up and jerk from the pleasure you receive and yell begging popi please!
    You got one and I'm on my way to hit number two.
    Do you want popi to long stroke it or is doggy style good for you?
    Damn your so hot and wet I almost got side tracked.
    Don't trip I've refocused as I give that ass a smack and attack.
    That kitty purring with each stroke.Then two slaps and an arch of your back.
    Call me the best because you got two O's tapped out then passed out and thats a fact! 

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    MsKrystle commented on UNTITLED

    07-12-2009

    Yeah I was a little confused too but then i realized you flipped it on us. Very nice. I was gonna try something like that but didnt want ppl thinking i was a lesbian. But you pulled it off. Good job

    boriquamorena

    07/25/2009

    Thx mommi I didnt think it sounded that way.But give it a try anyways.Thx for comment.

    phatdaddee commented on UNTITLED

    07-10-2009

    I had to check your profile again because I thought it said female. Good job!

    boriquamorena

    07/25/2009

    Female I am and I just tried something new from a female thinking in a male point of view. Thx for the comment.

    FLAWLES commented on UNTITLED

    07-01-2009

    By the end of the fourth sentence, I was like whoa! I had to start back over regroup. This is great. You seen to have written this from a man's point of view, of what a woman would want, from a WOMAN'S, point of view.

    boriquamorena

    07/01/2009

    You caught that huh:) I was trying something new.So you like how that turned out?Thanx for the comment.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    boriquamorena’s Poems (8)

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    To Be 2
    UNTITLED 3
    Overated 7
    ? YOU ? 2
    IF I ? 3
    What do you see? 4
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