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    Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete)

     There is so much complexity
    in this world inwhich we live
    jobs have loss their security
    as a result, earning a college degree has loss its thrill

    marriage is no longer considered
    an honorable and sacred vow
    but this exchange is often belittled
    and infidelity is more profound

    Crime has become an acceptable form of business
    loyalty and integrity was once the "rule of thumb"
    but individualistic and selfishness
    is what the world has become

    many have collided and have decided
    to no longer love one another
    selfishness and pure hatred is the only way to describe it...

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    cbilliard commented on Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete)

    02-09-2010

    I LIKE WHERE U GOING TO TRY AND TAKE THIS POEM..YEA GOTTA LET THE PEN DO ITS THING ON THIS ONE
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    oneloveALZ commented on Untitled (This Poem is not yet complete)

    02-09-2010

    I like this poem....I agree with this left n right its all you see ...nice flow in this one
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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