UNWANTED

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    UNWANTED


    I only live to be the person I wanted to be

    I only breathe to fill the lungs inside me

    Happiness is my desire to complete me

    But how can I do all these

    When people around doesn’t seem to understand me.


    I can see myself running alone

    I can see myself drowning in the storm

    I felt so helpless that I wanted to cry

    I felt the misery but I’m blind.


    I come to realize the meaning of life

    Concrete heart, strong mind, the keys to survive

    I then think If I’ll be sad and blue

    Then I’ll be the one losing

    When my poor heart is missing.


    I’m only human sensitive to anything

    I feel so down when someone prejudge me

    Because of the color of my skin

    I may have been aloof all my days

    But all I really wanted is a fair play.



    Just when I thought my nightmares would end

    Silhouette of cold emotions will mend

    But then you said I’m wrong

    ‘Coz I’m blind…

    Blinded by the truth of saddened reality

    Blinded…Unwanted…

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    Mosfabulous commented on UNWANTED

    08-09-2009

    I can feel every you are saying because i been that person before. Keep your head up and don't give up. I love your poems. I want you to read my poems if you would like to.
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    HappyGob commented on UNWANTED

    08-08-2009

    In a song I heard, "we all sleep alone" Life is sad, but a person can choose to be happy regardless. Your far from home in a difficult land, I have worked in the KSA. I like the poem, but refute the sentiment,
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    DerekH commented on UNWANTED

    06-20-2009

    I can feel your hurt and anger in this poem. I loved it. Stay strong and dont let the world change you
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    Ron commented on UNWANTED

    01-27-2009

    salamat...life's greatest teacher is the pain of experience...its best student or those who apply what life has taught us..Stay strong, the sun will still rise tomorrow..
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    Phoenix9 commented on UNWANTED

    11-27-2008

    very well written, feel the emotion
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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