Unwed Mother

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    The hardest decision I ever made...

    Unwed Mother

    I never thought I would be doing this alone.

    I can count on him for all of the baby’s needs,

    But none of my own.

    I wish I had more to offer this child

    Than a broken home.

    But I can’t stay in a relationship

    Where I don’t respect ME

    Or I will also be giving this baby

    A broken Mother.

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    NBParis commented on Unwed Mother

    09-13-2010

    Thank you Simone, very well done. Strong and gentle at the same time.

    infiniti commented on Unwed Mother

    10-19-2009

    How powerful and how ture, good job will done. Infiniti

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