UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

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    UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE
    ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

    UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?


    Hey everyone .. what's up ?
    My name is Clyde
    This here's my new girl Lula
    We used to live at the zoo
    Until they mistreated us

    We've been on the run
    For a week and a half
    They were force feeding Lula
    An experimental project .. they said
    Can't you see she has turned ill .. white ?

    I was scheduled next
    Lula hyped up .. grasped me
    Led me to our friend .. the giraffe
    We bounded up her neck
    Over the fence and gone

    Presently we're homeless in the free world
    Can't find a job to save our lives
    For only a few bananas a day
    We'll work real cheap
    Making people laugh

    I'll jump through hoops of fire
    Ride motor bikes
    Lula will spin delicately balanced umbrellas
    Whilst dancing on an elephant's back
    C'mon, give us a break
    Isn't there a circus coming to town ?

    UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE

    Copyright © June 2009
    StandingBear

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    rsalassi commented on UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

    10-26-2010

    A delightful metaphor for a larger problem facing us without an obvious solution. Excellent!

    StandingBear

    10/26/2010

    Appreciate your dropping by the circus. I'm deeply humbled.

    Hampton commented on UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

    10-21-2009

    I missed this one somehowback there. How cute and entertaining

    StandingBear

    10/19/2010

    Wow, nearly a year ago...I somehow missed saying thanks for your kind comment...thanks my friend

    laydbak1 commented on UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

    06-26-2009

    What a cute story.... and, irony..... the bittersweet freedom of repression... A good write...

    StandingBear

    06/26/2009

    Thank you laydbak 1! SBear

    GentleT commented on UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

    06-25-2009

    Very much humor in this. Good job. I like the escape route. Nice to have friends to help you out of a jam in life.

    StandingBear

    06/25/2009

    Thank you GentleT! SBear

    BrielleC commented on UPA PICTURE CHALLENGE ~ ISN'T THERE A CIRCUS COMING TO TOWN ?

    06-25-2009

    Awww.. I love this one!! Too cute and gives such a great humor to the pic! nice way to go with this one!! Bravo once again! I'm having trouble with this one, myself! 10 for sure!

    StandingBear

    06/25/2009

    Thank you BrielleC! I think the pool is helping me since it's helping keep me cool from the hot weather. SBear

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