Vanity

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    • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

    Vanity

     A look, a gaze, an eye to see
    from whence the light does fall.
    Bright it makes the path for me,
    and fond memories do me call.

    Ear to breast it is said my dear
    helps when sight does not.
    Each step we walk is not to fear
    the heed that salt cost Lot.

    As creek to river to sea does run
    thence to show how oceans grow,
    so this day for me was begun
    as a scarlet journey long ago.

    Fain vanity of vanities,
    floes snow to ice then water,
    they hide the tree's green mysteries.
    and coat white the lambs to slaughter.

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    tierra7 commented on Vanity

    12-27-2009

    i'm totally blown away...by your softness of inspirin' words comparin' the ability to see ...as we hold on to faith and continue to walk by it.....mucho mucho bueno amigo...Namaste...Terra@}-'-,- (10+ )
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    Grito

    12/28/2009

    I think that this is one of my best for God, if not my best, thank you for your encouraging words kind Tierra!!

    AIXA commented on Vanity

    11-15-2009

    Great and inspirational! keep doing the good work Grito.
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    Grito

    11/15/2009

    Besos y abrazos linda!!!

    Tempestlady commented on Vanity

    11-15-2009

    You make me reminisce, then believe in the power of touch. Test my knowledge of my faith and test my belief in creationism. Then end in a beautiful reality pill of life. A journey of oneself. I enjoyed it. Write on......
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    Grito

    11/15/2009

    It does me good to see that you went on a journey, thank uyou for your great and understanding review Tempest!!!

    Charlie23 commented on Vanity

    10-31-2009

    This is a very well written piece of poetry, Grito. I love the analogys used each one fitting perfectly and leading to the next!
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    Grito

    11/01/2009

    A great review Charlie, thank you very much!!!

    knight4696 commented on Vanity

    10-31-2009

    Hey Grito - A beautifully written poem and a great read! Love the metaphors and imagery! Great Job!
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    Grito

    11/01/2009

    Thank you very much Ken, enjoyed reading your great review!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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