Venus's Penis

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Venus's Penis

Venus's Penis made a point to Love
Hanging high in the rings above
And flashing by in a comment
Went a girl with a pen to vent
Laughing in the Light of a man
Erotic explosions of her mind
Electrifying in the eyes of Time
Venus's Penis is a pointed rhyme...

Sublime in the Juice pool so scoop
and drink up the Love fool! Ample
chants enchant you too as
samples of the damp do soothe...

So move with your hips Love and
Kiss of the Mist in the Me Dove
Drink from the tea of my needs and
Lose your mind to the lust I crave.

Your eYes are the wet of my sea cove
Licking my skin with your see foam
Pulling me in, to your water... hot
from the stream in your steam, Guiser...
Wiser yes I can be...Venus's Penis,
Made a point indeed;

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ginga commented on Venus's Penis

11-08-2009

Izzy, This not only is lusty but well written and creatively thouhgt out in its play on words. Never was there such a penis who could make his point so eloquently. ginga

IzzyGumbo

11/10/2009

Hugs ginga! thank you!

Hampton commented on Venus's Penis

11-08-2009

Panties and penises this morning in your poetic offerings. You must have had some very interesting dreams last night. Good write.

IzzyGumbo

11/08/2009

;) I'm had some very interesting yes...

stellar commented on Venus's Penis

11-08-2009

Love this one....totally love this one...my Aphrodite paled in comparison with this one lol....

IzzyGumbo

11/08/2009

Stellar, I appreciate your read! And wonderful comment... all poetry is loved ;)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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