Lost and Confused but theirs always the Truth

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I just tweaked this a little hopefully it’s better than it was

Lost and Confused but theirs always the Truth

I am so lost and sometimes found, Why do these real thoughts keep me so bound? What did I do or didn't I do? Why do I keep searching only for you?You are right beside me forever with me, forever in me, always there for me. I keep searching for what you are not, high and low. whats the next plot? You try to save me as I try to kill me, im hurting so much. Why can't you heal me? I have lost myself I will never be found, My words to you are meaningless yet to me so profound. I will never let go I will never not grow.I will always be here for you but you already know. never to leave you i will never be free from you .I think that I can finally see what you see in me. Maybe ? No need for court , because we all come up short. As long as you have faith it doesn’t matter your fate because the Glory of God is forever so great!

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JasonDivine commented on Lost and Confused but theirs always the Truth

11-11-2019

I totally changed this poem from my original kinda like what happens to those who believe lol

JasonDivine commented on Lost and Confused but theirs always the Truth

09-20-2019

Dang auto correct the sentence not on

JasonDivine commented on Lost and Confused but theirs always the Truth

09-20-2019

Too many For’s in on sentence I would delete the first but it will not let me

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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