Vampire Kiss

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This is what it feels like to be kissed by a Vampire- Hard to resist.

Vampire Kiss

Anchored in your timeless velvet embrace

locked within your gaze

my soul flew away to an archaic place

a trace of your dark heart was all that was offered

a lifetime vanished and eons ripped by

as you plunged your thirsty growl

reaching hot bloody nectar just beneath the surface

swirling in cavernous holds within and bursting through

thrust into oblivion

buckling in delirious swoon

love sickened with your hallucinogen

then absent of all,

wilted as a wasted flower

fragrant only with passion's quiet thunder

flight became you

 -M. Jacobs

 

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ginga commented on Vampire Kiss

01-14-2011

jake, Sensuous and taboo, this poem on how vampires kiss, seemingly comes fgrom one who has experienced it. ginga

danmartyjake1

01/15/2011

Experienced it through a dream that felt absolutely real.... interestingly enough, so that I was able to lock those feelings into words. TY

LenaM commented on Vampire Kiss

01-13-2011

I agree with kah that this ought to be entered into Poets of Blood forum for the Bleed For a Cause, Vol 2 - this is masterfully written a 10 from me and into my favs

LenaM

01/13/2011

this is the link for the forum you need http://www.originalpoetry.com/forum/view/topic/topic_id/4336

danmartyjake1

01/14/2011

Thanks for the supportive words and link. Smiles!

WordSlinger commented on Vampire Kiss

01-13-2011

This is good as it gets I think the ending is masterfully written, much to appreciate, very good, ty WS

danmartyjake1

01/14/2011

Coming from you, that's a high compliment! I always like your poems. Many thanks!

HarverTomsson commented on Vampire Kiss

01-13-2011

She knew that he could ride her buck So she never bucked his ride 'Twas a vampire's crafty crimson suck That stole what her heart denied. Some women pray for those that'd take What virtue can't display It's only then that they'd partake In any celebratiing way.

danmartyjake1

01/13/2011

Wow! I like your response to "Vampire Kiss". Cool! Thank You!

gogant commented on Vampire Kiss

01-12-2011

AAAAhhhh, my kind of poetry.......You have a way with bringing out the best of us vampires, my dear..........Unique and splendid...

danmartyjake1

01/12/2011

Thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks for checking it out.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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