Vampires Suck



Vampires Suck

Vampires suck
but it's not their choice
they'd rather wake you
with a lovers kiss
 than the silent whisper
of deaths cold voice
they'd rather hold hand
escorting you through the door
instead of hiding in shadows
and longing for more.
they rather you'd return
a long passioned kiss
instead of begging for breath
the warmth longed missed
a call for your love
 with lust in their voice
vampires suck
but it's not their choice

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SuziJean commented on Vampires Suck


Brilliant! "Vampires Suck" that was really clever!

Viper89 commented on Vampires Suck


This poem made me laugh!!! It the funniest/coolest vampire poem I've ever read even compared to my "Poetic Vamp" Well Done Sir!!!

cheronld commented on Vampires Suck


You put yet another romantic twist to the Dark Night and the romance to its dance....I really enjoyed this very much...great job...Cher

speechless commented on Vampires Suck


haha i love it. it's got the perfect amount of humor to it. :)

Teardrops commented on Vampires Suck


The vamps have a problem they cant enjoy the warm sunlight and sometimes being in the dark sucks on it own lol Marie

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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