Vulnerable Girl

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    Vulnerable Girl

    Wake Up

    It's a Fresh day

    To be angry at the world For some SHit

    That you deny to forget....

    With your quick spouts of anger

    which you let go with no remorse

    As the rain Pours on her

    She let's PAin Take it's course

    Vulnerable Girl....

    Look at everyone but never look at yourself

    You think they all judge when you do it yourself

    It's The life you live as Vulnerable girl

    With a loss of faith for the world.....

    While you go to school you strive for perfection

    But you derrive from society's detection

    You don't want to be a part of what you participate in, Everyday

    And you have the choice to speak your voice

    But you remain and alone and quiet by choice.........

    You have the choice to rejoice

    But your slowly dying.......

    And as the day's pass by

    I really hope you realize

    That everyday won't be the same

    Because Even the darkest days

    Will have it's Bright setting

    And All we really need is the air

    we Breath to survive.....

    And all you need to live

    Is the confidence

    To make it out alive

    Because living is only temporary......

    Vulnerable girl

    Look at everyone but never look at yourself

    You think they all judge,when you do it yourself

    It's the life you choose as a vulnerable girl

    With a loss of faith for the world.....

    I hope you realize some day it's a beautiful world...



    Written by:Manuel Martinez
    All Copyrights Reserved

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    BigBrooks commented on Vulnerable Girl

    02-14-2009

    Man, I really don't understand, are you trying to be a hispanic version of the Madd rapper, I honestly don't undastand'would you please tell me what you plan

    kaka17 commented on Vulnerable Girl

    02-01-2009

    that was really real and i can tell you write from your heart you are an amazing writer keep up the good work.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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