Waiting

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  • allyrene19
  • Our lives are sometimes shaken so that God can do a mighty move in you and those that surround you,

Waiting

Its like a strike to my chest when you leave,
I swear I can't breathe,
Everything that resembles life just freezes,
And I am left here motionless,
Waiting for you to come back and wind the key,
But until you do imagine me, suffocating

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Sx9 commented on Waiting

11-02-2010

ever imagine how it all started,totally different from the end,,can be so devastating at the end almost take you away,,experienced both end of the spectrum and truly must say am not waiting,,short and sweet,,

allyrene19

11/08/2010

Thanx so very much!!! I really appreciate your comment and your ability to relate. :D

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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