Wandering in the Night

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    Silent creatures wander in the night....

    Wandering in the Night

     A step in the darkened field she took
    Glancing my way as I went by
    Grazing dangerously close to death
    She was graceful yet terribly shy

    Hidden she thought by the night
    Chancing the obstacles near
    Nourishment needed to sustain her
    For no one is feeding the deer

    Eyes shine in the glare of the lights
    Statuesque she dare not move
    If she stays very still in the darkness
    Her safety surely will prove

    Swiftly she runs deep in the woods
    Joining the family there
    In the comfort of the herd
    Protection is theirs to share



    Swan

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    carynontherhine commented on Wandering in the Night

    07-26-2010

    I love this Purple swan! I adore the ending of this write. So true of the beautiful Deer. The most popular to see at times in the distance only to see it run quickly away. No wonder it is scared of man, just look at us? How barbaric we can be! I loved it!TEN for sure!
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    purpleswan

    07/29/2010

    Thank you.....

    dahlusion commented on Wandering in the Night

    07-25-2010

    Wow!! real and surreal all at once:"She was graceful yet terribly shy"—lovely! Bravo, Swan!!
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    purpleswan

    07/25/2010

    Thank you so very much Dah....Swan

    angel33614 commented on Wandering in the Night

    07-25-2010

    Brilliant poem my friend, very well written and has a great flow, very natural. Your words bring us not only into the moment but give us the eyes of the poor deer as we stand there shaking in our boots hoping you don't run us over, lol. great write my friend, bravo! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka the poem buster
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    purpleswan

    07/25/2010

    Thank you.....Swan

    jyothi commented on Wandering in the Night

    07-25-2010

    Excited to read,It's widely displayed the care for animal.
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    purpleswan

    07/25/2010

    Thank you kindly, jyothi.......Swan

    gogant commented on Wandering in the Night

    07-24-2010

    Way to go, Swan.........you saved a deer's life........that has to be truly frightening for a deer to look into the glare of headlights on a dark deserted wood's edge..........Love, it................................g
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    purpleswan

    07/25/2010

    Thanks gogant, your words are sweet....She was such a beautiful site. Glad I could convey my thoughts after seeing her..................Swan

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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