Was This Right?

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    Was This Right?

    I feel like im in the ocean
    I'm floating in the sea
    I look up to the sky and wonder why me?

    I hear cries from a baby and
    cries from a man, I think to myself
    how can I stand?

    I looked into her eyes and precious is
    what I see, I say to myself why did this
    happen to me?

    Why did he go, why couldn't he stay,
    why did he leave us to stray?
    Were lost in this world, feel like were out of sight,
    we look into each other eyes and say we have to fight

    Will we be happy or will we be sad
    hopefully everything end out right
    and were all not mad. Will we be wrong or
    will we be right, who knows only the time is right.

    should I look for foward or should I look back
    when I think about it, it all looks like a trap.

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    ginga commented on Was This Right?

    02-08-2010

    Boyd, You have tenacity and strength which pour out of these words of a family who will survive. I appreciate your steadfast guardianship for the children. ginga

    SBOYD

    02/08/2010

    THANK U

    nonsequitor commented on Was This Right?

    02-02-2010

    Your verse is RIGHT, I feel your pain, Always look forward,whats done is... Write On!! May I suggest some punctuation for more emphasis!!

    SBOYD

    02/05/2010

    THANK YOU....

    sherry122 commented on Was This Right?

    02-02-2010

    This is written very beautifully, it’s a poem with feeling. Precious is there to give hope and strength, so never lose hope.;)

    SBOYD

    02/05/2010

    YEAH THATS THE MAIN IDEA FOR THE POEM!!!! THANK U

    nhorlandi commented on Was This Right?

    01-28-2010

    well written, lines flows smoothly, very admirable. I do believe that all your writes were based on your sad experiences. That's only the beginning and you started it right. Keep writing, dear.

    SBOYD

    01/28/2010

    THANKS

    RHPeat commented on Was This Right?

    01-27-2010

    Desertion without reason always leaves us questioning who we are. In truth it is not a reflection on who we are, but who they are. Live in the present and spirit will be with you without any traps. Just being the best you can be each day is a real blessing in itself. later a poet friend// RH Peat

    SBOYD

    01/28/2010

    THANKS ALOT!!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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