Waves...

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    Waves...

     Crashing
           Crashing
                 Crashing
    like hot waves
    Crashing
           over
               me...
    My desires cause me
    to suffocate...
           as waves crash inside me...

    Then I look
            into
               his eyes...

    In my heart,
    I feel
    Rippling 
         Rippling
               Rippling...
    Ripples,
          like those of lotus ponds,
               Go out from me
    and return
          Ten
               Times
                       Stronger...

    His love-ripples
          encircle my heart
               and are
    more sacred,
           more cherished
    Than the
           Crashing
                  Crashing
                         Waves...

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    LenaM commented on Waves...

    01-09-2011

    wow this is amazing !!! the passion so eloquently written in powerful waves oh this piece is deserving of more than a 10 so with that in mind 10 +++++++++++++++++++++ and into my favs
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    ImStillHere

    01/09/2011

    hahaha thank you Lena :) ~Audrey

    LenaM

    01/09/2011

    the descriptive way you wrote this including the waveslike way you placed the stanzas sheer genius

    gogant commented on Waves...

    01-08-2011

    Wow, you bring the reader along on those crashing waves....one can almost feel the saltiness of two lovers riding high above the waters.............Terrific...................................................gogant
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    ImStillHere

    01/09/2011

    Thanks :) ~Audrey

    Teardrops commented on Waves...

    11-28-2010

    Your writing is amazing thanks for a wonderful read my friend Marie
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    ImStillHere

    11/28/2010

    thank you for that wonderful comment :) ~Audrey

    DeepEclipse commented on Waves...

    07-30-2010

    Balance. I like how you bring it back around. It starts out suffocating then ends breathing deeply. Nice. Enjoyed the unique structure.
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    ImStillHere

    07/30/2010

    thanks :D the structure is actually an idea i got from a journal i was looking at in a bookstore at the mall.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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