We All Need Stars In Our Life

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Always Remember that We All Need STARS in our Life, Aside from the moon they are the only heavenly object that Shines a light for US in the DARKNESS. Who is a STAR for you? Do you remember the last time you told them, and said Thank You****

We All Need Stars In Our Life

We All Need Stars In Our Life

Stars fill the sky
my how beautiful and sublime
Some brighter than others
reminding us of another time

Stars are truly special
individually unique in their own way
A guide through the darkness
for each and every day

Through struggles and obstacles
they're Amazing and Divine
A blessing to show the safest path
they light for us when they Shine

During our life may we be lucky
to have many to light our path
To keep us from harm and
steer us from evils wrath

Some of us are blessed by
a truly rare and special find
One of the Brightest Stars
and most amazing to ever Shine

If you find yourself in their presence
It can only compare to a Dream
Awe Struck at the most
brilliant thing you've ever seen

On occasion those Stars are knocked
down and fall from the sky
Be sure to do what you can
to help them learn again to fly

They can help you through anything
especially that cause the most strife
Thank You Bright Shining Stars
that I've been lucky to have in my life

You helped me through the darkness
Sharing your light at just the right time
May you ever be so lucky
to have a Star like mine.

 
JD Wright 11/22/2009

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DaleJohnson commented on We All Need Stars In Our Life

11-26-2009

very nice, heartfelt excellent use of words Thanks for Sharing

BigDaddyCash commented on We All Need Stars In Our Life

11-25-2009

I just read about a star in your life that was a love you were dreaming sweet dreams of, now it sound like you found your star in a galaxy of stars. From what I gather from your Precious Star you set your sights high. Did you find your star or did she find you.Remarkably it sounds like your dreams came true.

jdwright

11/26/2009

Yes and No, nut isn't that how life is..lol. We found each other at a time in our lives when we truly needed the other and didn't even know it, and even though we are no longer together we still remain best friends and share something that I don't know if either of us will ever be able to with anyone else like that, but yeah it is remarkable, and it is a blessing...

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

jdwright’s Poems (30)

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The Greatest Feeling 1
The Promise You Made To Me 1
Where I Stand On Things 0
The Road to Recovery 1
My Mother Duckling 0
Do You Know How Much I Cherish and Care For You 0
YOU WIN 1
WHY? 1
Thank You For My Gift 0
Some Of The Things I Enjoy 0
Wisdom From Another 0
This Is My Gift To You 1
WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES 1
Beautiful Instruments of Music 3
Dedication 2
I Don't Want You To Fear 1
Am I Alive or Dead 0
As He Lies In His Despair 0
Your Own Space And Time 0
It's Time To Press On 2
So Confused and Betrayed 2
Here Is Where I'll Always Be 0
Now I Know 0
Here's Your Thank You 0
Reflection 3
You Make me Wonder 3
General Reflection 0
Destiny or Chance 0
We All Need Stars In Our Life 2
Precious Star 2