Weep

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    Weep

     Sitting here feeling the pain.....................................
    Wiping away the tears as they fall like rain.
    My heart hurts deep inside of me
    I can't let go of the past....... I can't be free!
    My mind is racing with things from the past
    I keep asking myself, How much longer can I last?
    Words that where left unspoken...... actions left undone.
    Pain so deep...... All I want to do is run!
    But who can I run to? There is no one there!
    They have all left me.... No one cares!
    If I could just lay down and go to sleep..... maybe over my body someone else will weep.

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    Makuei commented on Weep

    02-23-2010

    I like it where it says, words and actions left undone.
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    GucciGurl

    02/25/2010

    Thank u. It is said to leave those 2 things undone no matter how the person goes. Keep reading I have been putton new things everyday

    kage commented on Weep

    02-12-2010

    just a darn good poem i like it the story is great and the words do it well
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    GucciGurl

    02/12/2010

    Thank you so much. So sad it feels so true.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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