Weightless

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    • To be set free, but locked away in my own cell of fear

    Weightless

    There's a guy and a girl in a similar dirty situation
    But the sense of one another banishes devastation
    Hand in hand they run jump and fall
    And get beaten down until they cant even crawl

    They suffer as they slowly dread through pain and despair
    With all strength towards frustration and aggravation
    But spoiled in a world taught so unfair
    They are thrown towards an undesirable destination

    Who they are and where they go
    United they stand weightless near or far
    But so long ago...

    They didn't think they needed anyone
    But they have recently detected
    That they are each others someone
    And everything that they expected


    They have each other down this lightless travel
    To hold as a crutch when they start to think it's worthless 
    Supporters when things start to unravel
    Them knowing that makes things that much more painless

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    CagedHeart commented on Weightless

    01-08-2010

    I love it bestie, good work like always. favorite line is, "but they have recently detected, That they are each others someone"

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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