WELCOME TO HELL

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    • Tonight I updated my page here. Added some pics of my family too.

    WELCOME TO HELL

    I thought you were an angel the day I met you
    everytime to my rescue it seemed that you flew
    with passionate kisses you promised me heaven
    your hugs and caress my pain did leaven

    I open my heart completely and gave it to you
    thats when I found out nothing was true
    your halo transformed to a pair of horns
    you made a queen with a crown of thorns

    My laughter turned into silent screams
    nightmares made me forget my dreams
    I became cold, numb and confused
    feeling used, abused and all bruised

    I prayed but my voice wasn't heard
    you made me think, what I said was absurd
    I forgot how to dance, sing, and smile
    became a loner bitter and hostile

    You wrapped me more each time you'd lie
    turned into thunderous gray my blue sky
    nothing mattered nothing I cared to see
    death was all I prayed to come for me

    I asked you constantly where was heaven
    but you left alone crying in this awful cell
    so I became uccustomed to your dark haven
    now I am a monster I see it so well

    now you are who complains about me
    and gets so confused when I angrily yell
    you ask where is that angel I used to be
    but now its me who says Welcome to hell...

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    MarionYost commented on WELCOME TO HELL

    01-18-2010

    great write, I can relate wow, You have an intense way with your words. nice job. All the best -Marion-

    poetrygal45 commented on WELCOME TO HELL

    05-22-2009

    I like this alot!!!!! I enjoyed this very much. you are very talented!!!!!! and nice to meet you! .

    ToddC commented on WELCOME TO HELL

    05-20-2009

    Very dark...very descriptive..i love it Poett...You turned the tables..but at what cost.....the soul of your muse...Welcome to hell indeed Excellent !

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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