What Is Happiness??

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    What Is Happiness??
    oh to be happy,
    whatever that is or may be,
    i have not seen such a thing in my world,
    what ever could it be?
    as i walk alone i see people so happy,
    but why not me?
    such sadness i feel deep down i cry and try to be
    to best person as i can be,
    but every time i try to be happy the darkness, it always follows me,
    why do you hate me to be happy?
    what did i do so bad in my life to feel such strife?
    all i want to do is live my life,
    free of pain, woe and agony.
    please tell me how or when this darkness will leave me and let me be,
    to let me live and let me breath!

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    countrypoet commented on What Is Happiness??

    11-26-2009

    I am sorry that you are having such trouble in your life my friend.Though I can't take away your sorrow;I do feel your pain and will pray that God will richly bless your life with joy and many blessings.Hang in there my friend.Like it says in the bible:this too will pass.Thanks for sharing this well written bittersweet poem.
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    Dimoyas commented on What Is Happiness??

    05-30-2009

    Sounds sooooooooooooooo depressing and depressed. Makes me feel your hopelessness and cry the help only God can help you find with your thankfulness for your blessings.
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    snowdove

    05/30/2009

    well i have been depressed for a long time. thank you so much for your kind words.i do pray i pray a lot i geuss the dear LORD isnt ready for me to be happy yet. but hopefully one day i will be. thank you again my new friend!!

    snowdove

    05/30/2009

    well i have been depressed for a long time. thank you so much for your kind words.i do pray i pray a lot i geuss the dear LORD isnt ready for me to be happy yet. but hopefully one day i will be. thank you again my new friend!!

    Sopradiction commented on What Is Happiness??

    04-27-2009

    Again very good poem--maybe needs a bit of revision in the middle--im not sure if you are lonely and innocent or dark and lonely--so think of which you would like to portray---but very good--keep writing...
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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