What Now

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i wrote this when i was 17 and i was in love

What Now

when it ends
what will become of me
when i fall
what could i be given to
as long as it's not a world
of pain
I'll want to be forever
alive
don't let me lose
my body of seventeen
i want to live forever
i want to see
heaven
and i want to smile
so lay me down to
sleep and every time
let me wake

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