What went wrong?

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What went wrong?

I pull my knees up,
And hug them close to my chest,
And I wonder,
What did I do wrong this time?
I only said
That I loved the words
That he said...

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Lunabella commented on What went wrong?

02-03-2011

Short and to the point i like it. Yes it is short, but the good choice of words shows a small episode in a story in your life. Ty for sharing. -Luna

himekachan111

02/06/2011

thanks for commenting

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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