WHAT WOULD YOU DO

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  • poett
  • Tonight I updated my page here. Added some pics of my family too.

WHAT WOULD YOU DO

What would you do if I stopped caring completely?
would you try to make me care for you
would you care for me even then
would you forget me right away
would you have something to say
or would have me committed as going insane?

What would you do if I just stopped talking forever?
would you miss my voice calling you each day
would you be more loving hoping something I say
would you worry and stay awake at night
would you even wonder why
would you thank God with delight?

What would you do if I was dying tonight?
would you try to please me all day
would you tell me how much you care
would you attentively listen to everything I say
would you pinch yourself wishing it was a nightmare
or would you make plans for when I'm dead?


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MalikPeterson commented on WHAT WOULD YOU DO

02-25-2010

an ode to the peaks and valleys of appreciation. I can see that this is the one you thought I had written a response to lol. good work :)

poett

02/25/2010

yes this is the one lol. Thanks once more

MalikPeterson

02/25/2010

you are welcome :)

WordSlinger commented on WHAT WOULD YOU DO

02-18-2010

Appreciating a person is needed, because when they are gone they are gone, and that's when the weight falls upon one, ty WS

poett

02/18/2010

True I always say that later Ill post another poem in which I express this sentiment much better I think Thanks once again.

Teardrops commented on WHAT WOULD YOU DO

02-16-2010

i would be sad if you were gone and i could no longer read your work so stay around Marie

JayJ420 commented on WHAT WOULD YOU DO

02-16-2010

The doing is contraversal, but luv to this poem...

poett commented on WHAT WOULD YOU DO

02-16-2010

Thanks my friend and don't ever think I'd get mad for any advice to improve my writing. You are a wonderful poet and truly am honored you take the time to read my writes...

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

poett’s Poems (46)

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STARTING ANOTHER YEAR TOGETHER WITH A BLAST 0
EMOTIONAL CHAOS 6
YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING 3
SENTIMENTAL NOSTALGIA 2
WHEN ISABELLA SMILES 4
AN OLD OWL'S HOPE 2
AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES 5
SWEET SMELL OF DANGER 3
FOUND MYSELF TONIGHT 7
SAD 6
Es tan Facil / It's so easy 6
MY CHOCOLATE LOVE INSANITY 5
CAN YOU STAND THE RAIN? 7
WHAT WOULD YOU DO 6
WITCHY MOM 5
LOVE IS FORGOTTEN 1
THUNDER STORMS WON'T GO AWAY 1
OPEN DOOR 0
A ROSE IS ALL HE LEFT 2
I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS 2
ERES MI MOTIVO - YOU ARE MY MOTIVE 0
A LOVER'S FULL MOON 0
I WAS LEFT IN SOLITUDE 0
I AM SO SMALL IN YOUR HANDS 0
ITS DIFFICULT ( ES DIFICIL) 0
LOVE 1
DEATH STOP TAUNTING ME 0
MI QUERIDA BELLA - MY DEAR BELLA 0
EXCRUCIATING PUNISHMENT 2
WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES 3
FOR ALL PARENTS ESPECIALLY THOSE WITH TEENAGERS 6
POETRY IS MY LIFE 1
MY IMMORTAL LOVE 0
WELCOME TO HELL 3
Pensive Gaze 1
In My Father's Hands 1
I Am Not Alone 1
I Stand Alone 4
I Wish I Could Just Fly Away 1
To Play 1
Everything Is Collapsing Around Me 0
Lets Divide It By Two 1
You Mean Everything To Me 1
It Only Takes A Minute 2
DEATH 3