What's Right

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  • Confusion

    What's Right

    When You have diffrent choices

    And Diverse Voices

    What's Right?

    When The sun sheds a shadow

    Who will remain alive

    Will it be the one who's free

    Or will It be the One's trapt dying privately

    Purely Speaking

    What's Right?

    Who knows what's right

    When diffrent opinions collide and emotions

    Get involved all the time....

    When the suffer's decline from a spine

    Who will be right

    When we all lose to The antagonist Inside

    And The Reality of the World with Universe Collide

    With the fact that no one Knows

    What's Right........?

    They Only skim Through the truth

    They Don't persue what Made Philosophers Mute

    They're Lips Are Frozen shut

    They don't even Try to Believe

    That they are capable Due to The basis Of greed

    They are compelled too believe That's all we Need

    Money, Fame and Fortune

    Which only Causes Distortion

    What's Right?

    I ponder as I stare Into the night

    Wonder when this answer I will bring to light

    Chocking on the Thought that this world may never be Right

    Realizing I am One in a Billion...And I can't change anything Tonight

    But Refuse To accept that what I've been wishing for is Unrealistic

    Because I realize Now I'm more than just another statistic

    With The question so vaguely calligraphic

    What's Right?

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    Niecy commented on What's Right

    03-14-2009

    Great job Spacer, Reminds me of one I'm working on, I want to call it 'Brainstorm' but haven't settled with it yet. This piece, very Intense.... So what's Right? Read my 'To The Right I Live' & tell me what you think?

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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