When I Looke At You

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    When I Looke At You

    When I look at you
    I feel happy and comfort
    When I look at you
    My heart feels complete and my soul feel like it has a mate
    When I look at you
    I see your baby blue eyes, that I fell in love with
    When I look at you
    I see my life with you forever
    Yes, I would say this was true love
    But now I can no longer look at you
    Without getting SICK

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    keithrberryjr commented on When I Looke At You

    03-14-2009

    i like the ending.wasnt expecting it

    Silentbetrayal commented on When I Looke At You

    03-13-2009

    I enjoyed the twist at the end. Caught me off guard.

    brandon commented on When I Looke At You

    03-11-2009

    that was great a lil shocker at the end but still great you keep leaving me asking for more

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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