When We Can't Touch

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  • Love And Wanting

    When We Can't Touch

     When We Can’t Touch
    Your eyes told me of your love
    I see your heart in the water deep
    And I feel your breath kiss me with the waves
    And I cry… Come back to me my love
    come back to me

     I stand here a little dove by the water’s edge
    Your voice calls to me in the softness of the night
    As the flow of the river takes you away I plead
    Come back to me my love come back to me
    Come back to me…I pray

    I see your heart in the water deep
    And it tells me of your love
    The waves hear my plea…I cry…
    Come back to me my love come back to me
    Come back to me my love come back to me

    I feel your spirit and your love so sweet
    I hear your voice in the wind
    I reach my arms out toward the water
    As my tears flow down into
    The crashing waves against my feet

    I stand here a little dove by the water’s edge
    Your voice calls to me in the softness of the night
    As the flow of the river takes you away I plead…
    Come back to me my love come back to me
    Come back to me…I pray

    I see your heart in the water deep
    And it tells me of your love
    The waves hear my plea… I cry…
    Come back to me my love come back to me
    Come back my to me love come back to me
    Come back to me my love…Come back to me

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    HarverTomsson commented on When We Can't Touch

    12-06-2010

    It's a lonely tie that is coming in. And the dove is in mourning. Irresistiible and compelling. Everyone leaving wishes for a hungry heart awaiting the return. Well done. Harv
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    koolmom0

    12/06/2010

    thank you Harv for reading and commenting for me, it is greatly appreciated. :) Rita

    StandingBear commented on When We Can't Touch

    12-05-2010

    One of the most beautiful love poems i've ever had the great fortune to read and enjoy! Pure beauty, through and through! A weekly winner if ever there was one! Bear
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    koolmom0

    12/06/2010

    Thank my friend, I appreciate your kind words. :) Rita

    sk8erpoet commented on When We Can't Touch

    10-06-2010

    i love this poem.....it is very special...love the emotion and everything that is part of this poem....great write...sk8
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    burnningman commented on When We Can't Touch

    10-06-2010

    great words must have been someone special you were waiting on
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    nonners commented on When We Can't Touch

    09-29-2010

    very very very great work i loved it and could feel every line bravo mom bravo!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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