When

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    When
    When;
    I ask of you oh Lord, do you hear my prayers.
    Are my words unworthy of your ears.
    Is my use of language so rudiment 
    that you can not understand my supplication.
    If not so!
    Then why do my prayers go unanswered,
    am I not ready Lord.
    I will wait Father by the shore,
    counting the grains of sand to learn patience.
    Oh Lord please do not forget the limits of my body,
    for the time of my song is but a whisper.
    Grant me your Grace, and Blessings;
    So I can show your awesome Glory!
    TREVON CREATIONS
    ALL RIGHTS RESERVED 2012
    When;

    I ask of you oh Lord, do you hear my prayers.
    Are my words unworthy of your ears.
    Is my use of language so rudiment 
    that you can not understand my supplication.

    If not so!
    Then why do my prayers go unanswered,
    am I not ready Lord.

    I will wait Father by the shore,
    counting the grains of sand to learn patience.

    Oh Lord please do not forget the limits of my body,
    for the time of my song is but a whisper.

    Grant me your Grace, and Blessings;
    So I can show your awesome Glory!



    TREVON CREATIONS
    ALL RIGHTS RESERVED 2012

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    deanne commented on When

    08-18-2012

    I Love this. You are a spectacular writer! I enjoy your gift immensely!
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    TREVON

    08/22/2012

    Thank you. I enjoy when someone can feel my words. It means we have created a bond of share emotions.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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