Why Can't You Love Me

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    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    Oh I was board so I guess this would just past the time!!!

    Why Can't You Love Me

    Love me

    Is it that hard to love me
    I know I stuck up
    But I can change

    I'm desperate for your love

    I'm desparte for your touch

    Your lips
    My lips 
    Reunite together

    Your breath
    My skin
    Touch eachother

    Why can't you love me
    What did I ever do to you
    Why it gotta be this way

    Was it my attitude?
    Was it the the way I talk?
    Is it the way I look?
    The way I treat you?

    ........what did I do wrong.......?

    I don't understand
    No! You don't understand
    The real feeling of love

    You just wanna meet a pretty girl
    Who would be your slave

    NO! It doesn't work that way.....

    Why can't you love me?
    Wait! Thats' not a question I should repeat to myself
    The question is....................


    Why did I fall in love with you?

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    phatdaddee commented on Why Can't You Love Me

    11-01-2010

    Great poem! I really enjoy the true emotion I felt in this poem! Thanks for sharing!
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    Vincent commented on Why Can't You Love Me

    08-06-2009

    that is the way, have to be strong, The best apples are at the top of the tree and so guys don't want to do the work to get the best ones, there lazy so they go after the easy ones that have fallen to the ground. good poem smiles Vincent
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    Vincent

    08/06/2009

    that would be some guy. and they go after the ones on the ground because there easy. Had to staighted that out sorry smiles Vincent

    alexan

    08/06/2009

    thanx dude, thats really true and its alright, i can read back words and every languge, don't bother, i mess up to sometimes ;p catcha l8r

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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